Please, when you have time, write to me again.

GRAMMAR INCORRECT TO CORRECT:

Incorrect: Please, when you have time, write to me again.

Correct: Please write to me again when you have time.

Correct: When you have time, please write to me again.

GRAMMAR: Please should not be separated from its verb.

WORD OF THE DAY:

orotund
adjective
orotundity [noun]

Having a strong voice; also, regarding pompous speech or writing.
Ex: The politician was remembered for his orotund deliveries.

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